geoslim21

you're back! love this story and have reread it several times, the last time being a few months ago. probably going to reread again though. thanks for the chapter

only watched episode 1 so far will probably bing it next weekend while dog sitting.

Please tell me his dad is not named Bruce

realist hero. that is a harem and the mc already got married and had kids (in the novel)

um where is the rest of the chapter?

shadow clones are a B-rank technique in naruto

like others I like v2 more. while the first 15 years were rushed it is understandable why since there really wasn't much that could happen other than growing up and training. wish there was more detail to the training though. I would like to see more detail on his travels and maybe side chapters showing his family after learning about him leaving and Amber and Qrow discussing Jaune after she left the village. Can't wait for the official start of v2 though

I say leave it. I may not usually be a fan of stories with Salem as a romantic interest but I really enjoyed this story and how you handled her before. Can't wait to see what you do with the new version.

yup

yup