Sunny4444

The more I read this, the more disappointed I become 🥱

old man???? change in attitude

Everything is great character design, world building, writing quality. But, if the knowledge that comes to him is only about beast evolution instead of everything like their weakness, their habitat, their nature, what move they're gonna make, etc. The story will be much better. It will be much better, if he descovers new things with encounters instead of the knowledge flows to him by just seeing them. It's only my point of view, and I like adventure, so don't take it to heart. Overall a great job.

the story looks good, I hope it didn't get abandoned.

unnecessary things here

one minus point here

I'm just annoyed by the word cantrip, instead why not use a simpler word spell.

If this novel wasn't based on game elements and players stuff I would be a good novel to real but alas

He is greedy as hell, so minus points for MC's character

Story is good, World building is good, I don't like the MC's character and story development is average