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“Subaru-kun! Rem will happily marry her hero!”
Another one about our favourite Oni! Enjoy!
Sorry for the long wait, I was busy with my Finals to work on this story. But I’m almost done, so I will be back to uploading more regularly. Anyways, here is the chapter you all have been waiting for. Enjoy!
I welcome all reviews, whether negative or positive, but there are a few points in your review that I’d like to address. First of all, this story centers around Subaru Gojo, a fusion between two characters—Natsuki Subaru and Gojo Satoru. The story's cover quite literally depicts the MC, so why were you expecting OG Gojo as the main character? Satoru Gojo does exist, but he doesn’t play a major role in the story. Due to the nature of him being a fusion character, multiple aspects and characteristics of Subaru and Gojo were blended into him—Subaru's kindness and politeness mixed with Gojo's confidence and pride. Neither trait is more dominant than the other, as I write him to have the perfect balance between them. You mentioned that the MC is a "simp" and "pathetic," but if you genuinely read past the seventh chapter, you’d see that this isn’t the case at all. Nothing in his actions—whether from the beginning or later on—supports that claim. "Well, he wanted to live an average life! That's why he's so lame!" And? That’s quite literally the entire purpose of the story. "...and all he truly wanted was to lead a normal, quiet life." That’s the last line of the first paragraph in the synopsis, clearly setting the tone for the narrative. If you read further, you’d see Subaru's reasoning behind his desire for a normal life. I'm sorry if my story didn’t meet your expectations, but this isn’t the stereotypical SI-OP Gojo Satoru who travels between worlds, builds a massive harem, and surrounds himself with one-dimensional characters with the emotional development of a ham sandwich. This website is already bloated with those types of stories. Mine is not one of them. That’s all I have to say. To be clear, this response isn’t an attack—I genuinely value all reviews, regardless of their perspective. Since my story didn’t appeal to you, I wish you the best in finding one that aligns with your taste.
My bad gng I forgot 😔
Obligatory self-made Review by the magnificent Zombie_man-sama! If you got any suggestions or feedback for me, don’t hesitate to send them, i’ll gladly read and learn from all of them!