Thomas_Plocher

wayyyyyy to may underscores in the story couldn't even make it past the first chapter which sucks cuz I was really looking forward to listening to it

so far there's wayyyyyyyyyyy to many underscores probably won't make it far in this book if there's to many more 😪😪

these can really take away from. a book if you put to many of them in if at all possible could you for the love of God not put them in thank you ps other then all the ----- i like the book so far

Moving forward can you leave the max part out after the first time while reading it’s not a big deal but for us that listen to it while working it gets repetitive and annoying other then that so far it’s a good book you should bring it to pocket fm🥰

Perfect thank you I didn’t mean to be so harsh about the comment but to many good books get ruined by the same problem chapter after chapter so far I really liked your book and didn’t want it ruined but other then that your book is great so far

Stop with all the =‘s there’s nothing that can chill a book and make someone not want to listen to it anymore then 80 equal signs in a row just hit enter or space a few times and call it a day🙄😒 I’m all for buying chapters but not if this is going to be a constant thing😒😒

If you could refrain from all the = that would be lovely it’s the most annoying part of the book😪

Love it please bring this book to pocket fm would greatly appreciate it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Would get full marks but idk if he has an ant or a termite and the fact that you go back and forth between the two is starting to get annoying otherwise a great story