KingBarney

The mc lacks basic common sense, we dont need a galaxy brained mc, just someone who would act as any normal person would in that situation, and so far the mc is performing far below that standard.

Most valid crashout Ive ever seen in a story

We need more stories like this during these tough times, please don't drop.

Dodged an ICBM with this one, thank you for your sacrifice brothers

+1

I dont wanna dampen anyone's mood but this is Ai, It seems like the people reviewing this fic are blind ti it because if how much they like the movie, the usual signs of ai are there such as em dashes, weird comparisons and vocabulary among some things. Overall, Id say this fanfic is just a waste of RAM and water like all ai fanfics are

The way the protagonist thinks seems like a reccolection most of the time which usually gets stale pretty quickly, I suggest making the mc think in present tense and have the actions in past tense.

Personally, I prefer 1st person but not for too long otherwise it gets dry

Thanks for deciding to continue this fanfic author! I reccomend picking some deeper/meaningful games to continue this story such as Before Your Eyes, Getting Over It, Firewatch, Underrale, that kinda stuff