Charlie12344

It's slow pacing , like we know the story will go but ,it still putting meaning behind the story and not directly jumping into it , I like it that way to build proper base , not directly ,

Hmm nice one , looking forward to it, but I want Elara to be bold one ,like playgirl type bold one, I don't want others to flirt to her ,but her to flirt with others , I know time period is pretty past one ,but I think it does not matter much

The way whitmore family status and power is being shown , I am guessing that they have significant say in government status if shown any in the future in novel . Business aspect is already shown , a political will make it more fire .