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though it may seem like no one responses in the comments, please do know that some of us are still reading and are always looking forward to the next chapter. your story draws in intense feels at times, and even us readers can feel them as if we are there with the character themself
how about "soon, after a little while, bruce..." instead of the "there was soon quite after a while and..."
such a wonder chapter, and with stain being Reduce to a stain on the ground. I wonder what the others will do
wonderful chapter as always. keep up the good work, and make sure you get enough sleep.
all for one, took himself from ya
it's time for the real Tournament to start. I wonder who will take 1st place this time. Will it be midoria this time or be someone else. we must wait and see
for a hero name, how about "The martial arts hero: Aquatic master" as a hero name.
oh, something I forgot to say. chief some people might be better at comics or making story points than writing, so it might be good to try doing a co-op story as well.
thanks for the chapter, I just found this story a few days ago and have been binge reading it. I do have a suggestion for chiff on if he ever decides to start writing, find a good platform where you can share your work. and for the writer of this story, get some sleep from time to time. I may not be able to speak for every other fan but sleep is important and we can be patient as you take care of yourself. don't let the other readers push you to hard, and take it easy on yourself. at times. till next time, Skelasanstor