Large_Lad

hope he goes ozaru, eats doma and gets low grade regeneration (muzan's blood will NOT turn a saiyan into a demon, they're biology is too cracked to lose like that, if anything itd give him a zenkai) then the conflict is the hashiras trying to cut his tail

"i SWEAR im not a demon, on god bro" - 7-8 foot tall man with four arms and a mouth on his stomach

OH MY GODNESS THANK GOD-

'not readable' is an over exaggeration on my part but it reads like a chat gpt fanfic with minimal editing and i i wanted to do that id just write the prompts myself, theres nothing wrong with using ai for a fanfic but you have to edit it enough that it has its own clear style specific to the person writing it or to the story you are to tell, gpt makes all characters use the same 3 line reaction/ descriptive patterns and contrast patterns (not this, not this, just that) even prompting gpt to not use those patterns or to varry the descriptive language per comparison/ the amount of comparisons helps to break up an otherwise monotonous read, going into one of those 'not this' bits and adding your own colorful metaphor or simalie can really spice up a read, "not warm, not hot, not boiling, just pure heat" as oposed to "not just warm, not 'hot', well beyond boiling, just pure face melting unfathomable heat" doing this for things you want to emphasize and stopping the 3 count contradiction on otherwords mundane descriptions or events because sometimes the absence of something speaks more when that something is finally used, like how soda isn't as sweet after eating candy, additionally, chat gpt and ai models tend to put one sentence statements between paragraphs which dont really mean anything because they happen after every other paragraph, using them sparingly creats more contrast between a mundane scene and descriptions of a truly shocking event makes alot of difference, if you want a line to stand alone make it some super fire badass shit

a great amount of time has passed...

you so far in your own cope that you actually think your opinion is worth that much of anyone's time- blame the sorce material buddy, stand proud, your LARP is strong.