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InvisibleInvisible

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hi please can you tell me your credit card details and your social security number. I swear I won't do anything bad UwU 👉👈

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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible5d
    Posted

    A very good fanfic, with good grammar. I just want more.

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    Blue Lock: I'm Kira Ryosuke
    Anime & Comics · HIT_ME_IF_YOU_CAN
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible5d
    Commented

    ah yes, the "long time" measurement. One "long time" should equate to 16.47 "big rooms". Very long indeed.

    The place was so massive that without the teleportation then it would take a long time going from point A to point B.
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    I am Morty Smith
    Anime & Comics · Try_hard
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible5d
    Replied to sari_saarinen

    later chapter, as in a chapter after this one

    Though, this is simply TOO much. Good grief, this is just ridiculous. Still he has good taste. Enough about porn, let's talk about business.
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    I am Morty Smith
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible5d
    Commented
    I sat down at my desk getting rid of unnecessary things and clearing my browser history since it was filled with porn searches. I wasn't disgusted since I can't blame OG Morty since he was a healthy 14 year old boy.
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    I am Morty Smith
    Anime & Comics · Try_hard
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible6d
    Replied to gamabunda4873

    This is not A.I.

    "As for how you died, you died trying to stop a suicide bomber from harming the place you worked at." Ah I don't remember much but I'm sure I did it on a whim. Maybe I was suicidal at that time? There's no better way to go than that.
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    I am Morty Smith
    Anime & Comics · Try_hard
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible7d
    Replied to Hentai_Senchou

    It was just Down D Stairs doing it's thing

    A genius little monster who defeated countless adults and beat little Zoro thousands of times, to die from a fall in the attic?
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    Pokémon Breeder In One Piece!
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible7d
    Replied to Nicolas_Pinheiro

    Your mana levels cannot change, but you can improve control and therefore decrease the amount of mana necessary for a spell.

    A Grimoire is a magical book that everybody gets when they are fifteen, and the size of this book correlates with the amount of magic power they have. An amount that does not change once since their birth. This book does not only help to control this magic but also enables the owner to use powerful techniques. A very valuable thing for almost any job, but one in particular outranks every over one.
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    Black Clover: The Demon Eyes
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible9d
    Replied to wisdomkeeper

    that was 1488

    Once the former empress of Amazon Lily and captain of the Kuja Pirates, Shakky was involved in the slave liberation incident of 1507, alongside Rayleigh and Gol D. Roger, helping the Boa sisters escape from Mariejois.
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    Pokémon Breeder In One Piece!
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible11d
    Replied to Great_Darkness

    Sooo umm this is awkward, I guess I'll read on and see for myself. Maybe I shouldn't jump to conclusions, my bad.

    Despite that, his lack of morality, his menacing personality, and his antisocial disorder were never his bright spots despite being genius, witty, and handsome. Every boy and girl tended to avoid my brother because he was sensitive to insults or someone he perceived as overstepping him. Even if it was just joking, when they did, he would resort to violence, and everyone became afraid of him.
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    My sister Arisu Sakayanagi is a yandere
    Anime & Comics · Great_Darkness
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible12d
    Replied to Great_Darkness

    also, discard my previous comment, I reread it and I worded what I was thinking wrong

    Despite that, his lack of morality, his menacing personality, and his antisocial disorder were never his bright spots despite being genius, witty, and handsome. Every boy and girl tended to avoid my brother because he was sensitive to insults or someone he perceived as overstepping him. Even if it was just joking, when they did, he would resort to violence, and everyone became afraid of him.
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    My sister Arisu Sakayanagi is a yandere
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible12d
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    What you've done is made a character that's a 'genius', made him a sociopath, but didn't combine them. You've made a character that gets overly angry at little things, like jokes that aren't even meant to be malicious, making him irrationally express that anger in physical violence. That I would say is something a sociopath would do, but not the sociopaths with a high IQ. They have impeccable social skills, even though they don't like being around people they can still be charming and manipulative. These are the characteristics of a high-functioning sociopath, which is what your MC should be if he was such a genius.

    Despite that, his lack of morality, his menacing personality, and his antisocial disorder were never his bright spots despite being genius, witty, and handsome. Every boy and girl tended to avoid my brother because he was sensitive to insults or someone he perceived as overstepping him. Even if it was just joking, when they did, he would resort to violence, and everyone became afraid of him.
    altalt
    My sister Arisu Sakayanagi is a yandere
    Anime & Comics · Great_Darkness
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible12d
    Commented

    why did the speech switch from "" to '', can you please stick to "speech" and 'thought'

    Ch 6 Imperial Court Will Be Stained With Blood
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    With My Impregnation System In The World Of Naruto
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible12d
    Commented

    Can you stop with the brain rot please

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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    Path to Omniscience: Tensura
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible12d
    Commented
    "Speaking of which, the year my son was born, my wife bought a dog. She hoped it would grow up with my son. We even named it... Growlithe."
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    Pokémon Breeder In One Piece!
    Anime & Comics · Zaelum
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible12d
    Replied to Great_Darkness

    I know what Antisocial behaviour is. But if he is antisocial then he can't be witty. You've described him as two completely different things, that cannot coexist. Also, I know it's a stigma for geniuses to be antisocial, but not in the way you described. Because how can you be a genius when someone can so easily control your emotions? Geniuses said to be antisocial are the type that struggle to socialise and understand 'normal' people. While what you described is antisocial behaviour, you need to realise that just because you are antisocial doesn't mean you instantly are aggressive and manipulative. This is just my opinion but personally I view this as a bad character design, but I guess my view doesn't really matter because I've already dropped this so whatever.

    Despite that, his lack of morality, his menacing personality, and his antisocial disorder were never his bright spots despite being genius, witty, and handsome. Every boy and girl tended to avoid my brother because he was sensitive to insults or someone he perceived as overstepping him. Even if it was just joking, when they did, he would resort to violence, and everyone became afraid of him.
    altalt
    My sister Arisu Sakayanagi is a yandere
    Anime & Comics · Great_Darkness
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible13d
    Commented

    bros the childish one, throwing tantrums

    Contrary to them, I'm glad that my brother is antisocial and dislikes forming relationships or befriending others. He seems repulsive when talking to them and deems it as childish. He was too mature for his own age, but he never felt repulsed when talking to me. Just like me, he only communicated with me because I matched everything that was supposed to be his.
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    My sister Arisu Sakayanagi is a yandere
    Anime & Comics · Great_Darkness
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible13d
    Commented

    not very intelligent then, to let his emotions get the best of him. Cringe edge lord

    Despite that, his lack of morality, his menacing personality, and his antisocial disorder were never his bright spots despite being genius, witty, and handsome. Every boy and girl tended to avoid my brother because he was sensitive to insults or someone he perceived as overstepping him. Even if it was just joking, when they did, he would resort to violence, and everyone became afraid of him.
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    My sister Arisu Sakayanagi is a yandere
    Anime & Comics · Great_Darkness
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible13d
    Commented

    First with is a bad

    A young man with around the age of sixteen, with short black hair, wearing a pair a black t-shirt and white shorts, walked down a street, holding a small bag of groceries. (I already got the gallon of milk and the food needed for tonight.)
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    Highschool dxd : Yasaka is my wife
    Anime & Comics · The_Creator223
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible13d
    Commented

    thought and speech should be separated, otherwise it's confusing to know if he's talking out loud or not. Like this "Speech" 'Thought'

    "After I attack, will it raise suspicions from others? This is giving me a headache!"
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    One Piece: One Punch Man
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  • InvisibleInvisible
    InvisibleInvisible13d
    Commented

    1% of saitama is kinda impossible to calculate

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    One Piece: One Punch Man
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