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ah yes, the "long time" measurement. One "long time" should equate to 16.47 "big rooms". Very long indeed.
later chapter, as in a chapter after this one
This is not A.I.
It was just Down D Stairs doing it's thing
Your mana levels cannot change, but you can improve control and therefore decrease the amount of mana necessary for a spell.
that was 1488
Sooo umm this is awkward, I guess I'll read on and see for myself. Maybe I shouldn't jump to conclusions, my bad.
also, discard my previous comment, I reread it and I worded what I was thinking wrong
What you've done is made a character that's a 'genius', made him a sociopath, but didn't combine them. You've made a character that gets overly angry at little things, like jokes that aren't even meant to be malicious, making him irrationally express that anger in physical violence. That I would say is something a sociopath would do, but not the sociopaths with a high IQ. They have impeccable social skills, even though they don't like being around people they can still be charming and manipulative. These are the characteristics of a high-functioning sociopath, which is what your MC should be if he was such a genius.
I know what Antisocial behaviour is. But if he is antisocial then he can't be witty. You've described him as two completely different things, that cannot coexist. Also, I know it's a stigma for geniuses to be antisocial, but not in the way you described. Because how can you be a genius when someone can so easily control your emotions? Geniuses said to be antisocial are the type that struggle to socialise and understand 'normal' people. While what you described is antisocial behaviour, you need to realise that just because you are antisocial doesn't mean you instantly are aggressive and manipulative. This is just my opinion but personally I view this as a bad character design, but I guess my view doesn't really matter because I've already dropped this so whatever.
bros the childish one, throwing tantrums
not very intelligent then, to let his emotions get the best of him. Cringe edge lord
First with is a bad
thought and speech should be separated, otherwise it's confusing to know if he's talking out loud or not. Like this "Speech" 'Thought'
1% of saitama is kinda impossible to calculate