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Just read the patreon and it sucked i got all the way to chapter 5 and there’s a lot more of missed spelling words.The MC is trying to replace Rick with Shane.the MC is be treated like a child even if he is a grown up and I no he is 11 but still he needs space to grow. If he came at the time before it all happened it would be a lot easier for explain Carl could have packed everything thing up as well as his mother took off to the quarry and when the mc started acting strange no one would think twice because Carl has to protect his mother and this way carl doesn’t have Shane to lean on for support at every given moment.remember he is a adult I a kids body so it can be easy ear to move around Anyway this is my take on it. Read this or not if this is what your into go ahead and read it if not don’t .Thank you
Don’t like MC being pressured for answers. And also he need to be more firm to give off the aura of someone who can’t be pressured into doing thing and can protect his sister from the volturi and if push come to shove the Cullen. Like if they hurt her they will die. Anyway this is my take on thing thanks for the chapter
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He should have checked for listening devices and cameras
Dude what wrong with you.I thought I put it in the comments that this is my first time writing a fan fic.This takes hrs out of my day just to come up with the ideas. At least some words of encouragement like your doing a good job but you need to work on some spelling,writing,details Ps:I’m doing this on phone so it harder then you think.
Just messing around with the system. Writeing two story a day get boring so I do this to keep myself interested in my story
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