That_was_fast

the mustache is burned into the soul of all viltrumites.

solo

what do you mean "late readers?" It came out yesterday.

100% agree.

I like the idea, but you're going too far too fast. Ease up a bit on the gas and let it grow slowly. I can accept this instance due to the trauma of war torn eve, bit if this is going to become a staple, then it could very well ruin the fic.

too clingy.

1 long chapter.

wrong fur coat. Amanda is wearing that one.

fair.