The plover has no fear, for it flies into the jaws of the beast and feeds on the same thing it consumes.
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For side characters, maybe. But for the MC, Pavor hates the concept of love and his focus is on solving the mysteries of this new life as the 'hero', the system and the world itself.
If you read even just a little bit later, you'll know the full extent of his powers. Besides, physical prowess is not the true measurement of power, especially for a god that is not of this material realm.
I thought my paragraphs were adequately short enough, it must be a formatting issue. I write with my laptop so most of the time I dont know what they look like on mobile format. I'll try to divide them into shorter ones
The author seems to have taken great consideration on the worldbuilding and lore of this story. It was interesting from the get-go and leaves bits and pieces to ponder over as you learn more about the characters. Overall, it's a pleasant reading experience.
It's only really a shocking revelation to the king and queen because the readers already know Duke Vanus is dead, and that's also not the point of this particular scene. The point is that, as will be shown later on, the people of Erosith are very open about their feelings and values honesty about those feelings more than class/etiquette.
This isn't really meant to demonstrate how the nobility works but more of how the world around Pavor works now that he's the 'Champion of Amore'/ the hero of the story. Everything goes well for heroes and they can do no wrong in the eyes of the people. It's like an outer force or deus ex machina is fixing everything to make it all work out, even in a very 'forced' manner. It's related to one of the plot threads of the story so it's not really something I could change
It was implied when the concept of Phobodemons were first introduced
So violent to a child, wow
The word 'chapter' is still in French, you might want to edit that
Baileif is the name of the town, hence why it said 'the town square of Baileif'