optimistic_writer
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optimistic_writer6hReplied to Gremmy_Th0umeauxCh 5 Trip to below- optimistic_writer6hReplied to Gremmy_Th0umeauxCh 5 Trip to below
- optimistic_writer8hCommentedCh 17 Besting my monster and falling again...
- optimistic_writer1dCommented
He's an uncle I would love having, hands down
Nappa swiveled his head toward Gohan so fast he almost snapped his neck. His eyes were sparkling as if Gohan had told him that Frieza Day would come early. Unable to contain his excitement, he shot into the sky with surprising speed for an injured individual. - optimistic_writer1dCommented
Bruh, raditz is smart. I dont know how u guys think hes dumb
"I see," Raditz muttered aloud. "If this is the case, then Kakarot has actually made a smart decision. Honestly, I can't fault him for that. Probably would've done the same if I were in his situation." - optimistic_writer2dReplied to Xseno_RainCh 16 (Question) Is the story alright, and if not, what can be improved?
- optimistic_writer2dReplied to Xseno_Rain
Oh, I see what you mean. That does hold some country twang to it. (ill be honest, I have a lot of southern american in me, so sometimes my words come out in a country accent. So I guess this works...I suppose
'I walked over to him and patted his shoulder.' "I don't really mind the profession. Those type's of things never really grossed me out. I mean, some just do it to do it." 'Mom always taught me to respect ones profession.' - optimistic_writer2dReplied to
Southern accent? I...Imma watch a video with someone having an accent and see what u mean by that
'I walked over to him and patted his shoulder.' "I don't really mind the profession. Those type's of things never really grossed me out. I mean, some just do it to do it." 'Mom always taught me to respect ones profession.' - optimistic_writer3dReplied to Zhawan2002
SCREW DRAGONBALL! FIGHT FOR THE EMPEROR! DOWN WITH CHAOS!
Jason's face reverts back to its original blank appearance before muttering, "Oh god no..." - optimistic_writer3dCommented
If you see something that seems like a spelling mistake, or just a written mistake, please point it out. I'll be going over the chapter in a bit to see if I can spruce it up, make it a bit more...presentable...? Eh, I'll see what I can do
Ch 17 Besting my monster and falling again... - optimistic_writer3dCommented'All this depressing thought's is really not something I should be thinking over. Damn it Z, think happy thoughts! Kittens and rainbows, delicious chocolate chip cookies with a nice cold cup of milk to dip them in! Mmm~, ...chocolate...' *GerwrRrRr~~~* 'I looked down to my gut, running a hand over my belly.'
- optimistic_writer3dReplied to Super_Killer_Mob16Ch 16 (Question) Is the story alright, and if not, what can be improved?
- optimistic_writer3dReplied to Super_Killer_Mob16Ch 16 (Question) Is the story alright, and if not, what can be improved?
- optimistic_writer4dCommentedCh 16 (Question) Is the story alright, and if not, what can be improved?
- optimistic_writer4dReplied to optimistic_writerCh 16 (Question) Is the story alright, and if not, what can be improved?
- optimistic_writer4dCommentedCh 16 (Question) Is the story alright, and if not, what can be improved?
- optimistic_writer4dReplied to optimistic_writer
The word length for this story will either be cut down to 2k or 3k words, and not 5k words like I've been doing for this story. The reason I'm making a second story is so I can transition from one story to another, a means of practice and better motivation to motivate myself to do more.
Ch 16 (Question) Is the story alright, and if not, what can be improved? - optimistic_writer4dCommented
I'm thinking on starting a second story. One that'll be written differently from how I'm writing this one. Wanna know what I think I'll write? A Danmachi story with a person being reincarnated into a body of a character from something differently seperate from Danmachi, and you'd probably never guess the character.
Ch 16 (Question) Is the story alright, and if not, what can be improved?