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Erza Scarlet, Irene Belserion, Natsu Dragneel as a halfie, Stark from Frieren, Shouto Todoroki, Kirishima Eijiro, Tanjiro Kamado, Erza Knightwalker, Rias Gremory, Sirzechs Gremory, Hisoka, Gildarts, Himura Kenshin, Pyrrha Nikos, Shiro Emiya

I think it was already in disrepair around a thousand years prior to the rebellion, and in the conquest it likely wasn’t touched because the stark king knelt to Aegon and became the King Who Knelt so there was no battle.

Rome isn’t founded until around 753 BC. If the MC is currently in 5000 BC per the system panel earlier, he’s got a lot more than 900 years to go until Rome is starting to be built. Earlier in the story, you mentioned th Middle East. Around this time, civilisation started closer to the Tigris and Euphrates river in modern day Syria and Iraq, becoming Mesopotamia. Maybe start there.

This is incorrect I believe. Pretty sure he founded the Genryu School which later became the Shin’o Academy, two thousand years before the Aizen Arc, but the Gotei 13 was founded only a thousand years before.

Shouldn’t this note 5 swordsmen with special blades? She killed two and didn’t give the blades back so presumably they haven’t replaced them yet.

The story has been fantastic so far! Regarding the comments, unfortunately, there will always be negative comments as some are not always able to think of constructive criticism so instead just criticise. Please disregard such comments and focus only on those that enable you to continue developing your writing and style, as well as in other aspects of yourself. I look forward to the next chapters as they come at the pace you set, rather than what is demanded by the readers.

I believe the rudder became a part of his skull during the storm which halted the Edd War and allowed the Roger Pirates to escape.

Why would you need that? Gajeel and Juvia joined Fairy Tail by that point as the Phantom Lord arc happened prior to the Tenrou arc. Unless you change the arc sequence, he could just join alongside Gajeel and Juvia.

Garp’s right hand man since the time of Rocks has been Bogard.

I don’t think Luffy had the Gomes Gomu no Mi until after Shanks and his crew had been coming to the island for a while. They are in Party’s Bar when Higuma and his bandits enter and cause ruckus. That’s when Luffy eats the Gomu Gomu no Mi.