Kutley

I haven't yet grasped some other elements. But the descriptions are so vivid. Like... I was immersed right away, losing the clear sense that I am reading nothing more than a novel. I also love the masterful progression the author gave Austin in the first few chapters. It's really worth a read! Well done!

I mean, purified

you should get your mind cleaned 😂

Thanks! 😊 This really has made my day!

a great cliffhanger!

Hey 👋. Thanks for your input, Martikus-san. Without you saying it, I won't have noticed. I have added paragraphs to the first chapter as you requested. And I'm going through the other chapters to see if they have the same issue. Thanks a lot!

nice one again

*to teleport

nice ability

vague and underdeveloped mechanism