This was my first novel so I didn't know how long before activating premium. The system and I will try our best to fix this, and delay the paywall. thankyou for informing, and I hope to see you again on tour own terms rather than mine. For me, what matters MOST is that a reader enjoys my story and remembers it. [img=Smitten]

Shameful Author here. This is my very first novel, my debut as an author. I got my inspiration from Syougo Kinugasa, and it is my dream to one day be as respected as him. There may be some mistakes in this story and I will be actively working to polish "IATSHOTY2024" with the 'continuous improvement' mindset. Please, have fun and may you live a fulfilling and happy life dear reader. If you have any suggestions, don't hesitate to wrote here in the replies. My dream is to become a published author, and oh what a dream, in which people wait eagerly to read the next chapter. To make that dream come true, I will WORK, WORK and WORK! May all of your dreams come true as well. Thankyou. ~Hamza Khan

I had intended to rewrite the first few chapters, and give it a slightly more mature form. I would appreciate any feedback if you like!

Useless for a hacker, useful for any human xd

I can't promise to improve in a single day, but I would want you to know that I take your comment very seriously, and that I will keep these points in my mind as I write the future chapters, and also improve the existing ones. This is the first version of the story, and I haven't gotten to editing it. I will definitely push further than this. This is not where I plan to take a breadth. Thankyou for your valuable insights, and I hope you the best!!

This is a very good comment and I will take my time to explain it. The character, no, the entire story, is drawing out from reality more than fiction. I have incorporated many things that happen in real life, rather than creating a character who's role is clear from the beginning. For instance, there are people who may be a hero for one group but a villian for the other. My character is a hacker; criminals don't think in binary terms like good or evil, left wing or right wing. They just do what suits them. The MC in this prologue appears to be complex and morally ambiguous, exhibiting traits of both anti-hero and villain archetypes. At first, the MC seems to have a strong sense of morality, however we learn that he wants revenge from humanity which has confused his moral standings, therefore he has the capacity to do good, but is currently an anti-hero. This is a complex situation that many people find themselves in. We are all either evil but lack the skill to do evil, or we are very skilled, but lack the immorality to use it in the way of evil. For those who lie in the shaded area, like the MC, is what I would like to focus at. However, do not be confused, for this event of Tokyo being obliterated, does set the MC on a path to betterment, although slowly.

thanks a lot for the feedback. I will make fixing the paragraphs my priority!

thanks a lot. I am looking forward to it too!

thankyou so much. I will do my best to deliver a masterpiece!

Ooops yess I'll correct it. I really appreciate your feedback. Saw this now and will change asap. hehe :)

Thanks for the suggestion. I will correct it asap, and search for other potential redundancies.