So far the story has been good, I know it's only been 2 chapters but I LOVE the characters personality it's so interesting, hoping this novel keeps it's current quality in the future.Good luck author.

Thanks for the chapter , the chapter wasn't slow it was interesting to know the lore of the world.Also will his power be like the curse speech from jujitsu kaisen but writing version?

The pace is decent but there are a few grammatical errors like " hearts pumping" like how does he have more than one heart pumping?Other than that I'm really interested in where this goes.