Shameless Author Review. This is a story I am crafting for my own pleasure. I do hope everyone enjoys this wonderful ride with me! This story takes pieces of everything that I enjoy in a good story and combine it into something that hopes to give us a wild ride while exploring what it means to be 'normal'

The story overall is entertaining and a decent read. The Author wastes no time jumping straight into the plot. We open up with a grand council of Royalty trying to discuss a way to save the world. A solution is offered but will have catastrophic consequences. Right away it grips the reader's attention, and the pacing is solid. You can tell that the author is not a native English speaker but that is nothing that cannot be overcome. Soon enough you will find yourself overlooking it, eager to get to the next tidbit that advances the plot.

The transition between characters was well done.

Entertaining first chapter and the quality of writing is good too!

Interesting first chapter. A unique take on introducing a System to the world but we are seeing it from the summoners point of view. I like it!

Thank you so much for your feedback! Chapters 7 and 8 have significant developments in this area as well. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. It's a true labor of love, and your positive response fuels my passion for writing it.

Thank you! A lot of rewriting and editing. This is iteration 3 of this particular chapter!

I really enjoyed how you ended this chapter with the realization that the main character keeps dying.

I assume this priest doesn't work for the big guy upstairs. I love the instant suspense.