TheDanza

I have two accounts, so I rarely use the author one

Not sure...

I see your point… but at the same time you have to remember shes a transcendent lifeform so…

He didn't change a ton. It was more like he just aged a couple of years

They dont look just alike more like brothers... I'll go back and edit it... and thanks for all the comments :)

I know, and I think it does get better in the near future, but it's hard to judge my own writing so Idk...

The Grim Reaper King has no standard form... and he was scrawny in his past life, but not this one.

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It gets better... in the beginning, to me, there isn't much else to describe them, just swinging their swords with no extra powers...

thanks