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Mikaela_Risner14minReplied to Troublethreeagreed
In class 10 of the senior year, there were two students without desk mates, one was the impossibly handsome Xie Xiaofeng whom nobody dared to approach, and the other was Chen Hao, who was despised by everyone. They were originally desk mates until Chen Hao offended the "Four Little Overlords," after which Xie Xiaofeng drove Chen Hao away.- Mikaela_Risner9hCommented
well, I can see why her friends would be upset to learn where she's going to college as she left without telling them anything or even an explanation. that feels a little insensitive to me. though, I read suzie's response differently than Rika. I suspect that suzie cares for Rika as a sister, but isn't always able to convey herself articulately. as such, she wants for Rika to be happy, but doesn't want to be the reason Rika leaves because rika is suzie's sister, whome suzie cares about. when Rika assured suzie that that wasn't the case, suzie then wanted to convey that she'd offer her full support for whatever rika wants to do. anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Ch 19 Ch 19: So, it was not me? - Mikaela_Risner9hCommented
hopefully, this means he's learning self-control.
"Tsk! Fuck you. I don't know why I even worry for you when all you do is make fun of me. Fuck! Shit! I will head to my room before you make me do something I will regret again." - Mikaela_Risner9hCommented
gotta admit, I'd expected Rika to wait for her friends, though I'd be leaving shortly after being left alone myself. anyway, I thought it was interesting to see the added bits about variations of alphas and betas. yet, again there wasn’t much else happening here, other than a little story set up, I believe. so, on to the next chapter!
Ch 18 Ch18: Handling the Situation - Mikaela_Risner9hCommented
wonder where Rika will leave Damiani keys if she's leaving without them
Neither Damian nor Emily would be back for the night. By now, they would be busy doing other 'deeds' elsewhere. - Mikaela_Risner10hCommented
not sure why Rika would be angry at this point. just feels a little off to me
Rika's eyes narrowed in anger as soon as he realised he had made a mistake. - Mikaela_Risner15hCommented
then why should he feel so superior? if anything, fatty is getting dumber from the sound of things here
A child's learning process was, from the start, one where they tended to immediately forget what they had just learned. It was just like how Fatty himself had behaved in his early childhood, memorizing a poem and then forgetting how it went the very next moment. - Mikaela_Risner23hCommented
I get the sense that'middle school' might beam something other than the grade levels here
The "Four Young Tyrants" were known as the four bosses of Jingwen Middle School's current senior year. The four called each other brothers, not only were their families wealthy and powerful, but they were also skilled in fighting. In Chen Hao's senior year Class 10, one of them was Xie Xiaofeng, the youngest of the "Four Young Tyrants." - Mikaela_Risner1dCommented
when aylin was being healed, I really didn't expect much to happen in this chapter. just mostly stage setting for future events.though I was good to learn about the adverse effects aspect of aylin ending up with another in that way. wasn’t something I was aware of. aside from that, I'm certainly interested in what the moon goddess will have to tell aylin and nox, as well as what an awakening actually is. although I also can't help but to wonder what else might occur in this scene. especially since I'm sure the purpose she had in bringing nox and aylin there has yet to be revealed. anyway, on to the next chapter!
Ch 27 The Revelation - Mikaela_Risner1dCommented
there's a problem in this paragraph. 'She took had been mesmerized, and she still was...' the word 'took' feels out of place here
Nox glanced down at her mate, a knowing smile on her face. She took had been mesmerized, and she still was, but she could now confidently say that her mate was prettier. After all, beauty is often in the eye of the beholder, so the adage goes. - Mikaela_Risner1dCommented
then there's always the speculations of people who go more for either wishful thinking or have decided how things 'should' play out, despite reality not really being that accommodating usually
She asked Nox to place Aylin on the bed of the private ward, an instruction that the Alpha followed reluctantly. The healer smiled, happy to see their Alpha in such a state. It was pleasant to see her care for someone to this extent, as they were growing fed up of other wolves speculating that the Midnight and Oriol packs would merge due to the mating of their Alpha and her best friend, while they all knew the true relationship between the two. After all, anyone could tell that they behaved like siblings, but eyes will always see what they wanted to see. - Mikaela_Risner1dCommented
I can hardly wait for the bully see Nora there at the martial arts school
Lucas seemed to sense it and said excitedly, "Miss Smith, there's something today. An unofficial disciple wants to send his son here to learn martial arts and strengthen his body. We've already prepared a class for him. He called today and said he wants to send five more children over. Do you think…" - Mikaela_Risner1dCommented
I can't help but wonder how this will play out when Pete's training there. assuming they see him, of course
Cherry nodded. "Yes! Grandpa Quinn has always wanted me to practice martial arts, but it's too tiring. My mommy will feel sorry for me, so I refused! If you want to practice, I'll let Grandpa Quinn teach you!" - Mikaela_Risner1dCommented
I'd feel the same way if it was me in that position
Situations like these were no fun because they made Rika's stomach flip with nervousness and hope. But she pushed it all down and let her rational thoughts take over. - Mikaela_Risner1dCommented
I've never been in a club, but I'd see if they had at least soda pop or something. that way I could at least say I had something to drink lol or water if nothing else
Unfortunately for Emily, Rika's levelheadedness made her a rational person, and she did not drink at all. - Mikaela_Risner1dCommented
does Chen have the 'sixth sense' just like the movie? after all, now he can tell others, "I see dead people" not that it'd prolly do much for him other than get him a reservation at the nearest psychiatric institute
"No! No! It can't be!" Chen Hao stared blankly at the "two people" before him. He remembered a recent news report about an old man who had died in the hospital, and his family claimed he was killed by a misdiagnosis by a female doctor, whom they then stabbed to death. - Mikaela_Risner2dCommented
"evil can't suppress good" my thoughts exactly👍
Ye Zhenzhen said confidently, "Evil can't suppress good. Why wouldn't we dare?" - Mikaela_Risner2dCommented
is he back to his original state? I'd think he's worse now than he was then
For the past twenty years, he had always wanted to enter the upper-class society and truly enter the rich and powerful. He wanted everyone to forget the poor aura that he emitted. However, this video had instantly beaten him back to his original state. - Mikaela_Risner2dCommented
flip burgers for a living?
"Bro Liang, what should we do in the future?"