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Meh4212hCommented300k, not 30k
Chai Jiliang said, "Princess Junwan, even though your servant does not believe these fifty thousand Heavy Cavalry are completely under Great Sum's control, considering that these fifty thousand Heavy Cavalry helped North City defeat a thirty thousand strong army of the Barbarian Tribe, clearly the master behind these Heavy Cavalry is biased toward Great Sum. Therefore, your servant still believes that these fifty thousand Heavy Cavalry will appear on the battlefield, and Great Sum's Aristocratic Family will certainly find a way to send these fifty thousand Heavy Cavalry to the battlefield."detailHaving children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wifeEastern · Summer fades into autumn.- Meh4218hCommented
' as he listened'
The Village Chief's expression grew solemn as she listened to the explanation. Soon, Aurora completed her explanation. - Meh421dCommented
300k, not 30k 200k, not 20k
Choking back tears, Wu Yuan reported, "Our caravan was originally heading to Yan County to receive the King's spoils of war, but we heard that the King's army of thirty thousand has been defeated by the North Prince. The King died in battle under the walls of Yan County, twenty thousand soldiers have been killed, and another hundred thousand have been taken captive by the North Prince!!!"detailHaving children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wifeEastern · Summer fades into autumn. - Meh421dCommented
Why has Lu Chen started thinking that way of her? It's only Chu that thinks that way of her.
Lu Chen, with Zhou Youyou and Zhou Xiaoxiao in his arms, looked up at the system interface before him and thought that to gain more experience points, it seemed he'd have to find that "bitch."detailHaving children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wifeEastern · Summer fades into autumn. - Meh421dCommented
200k, not 20k. Whatever is doing the translation sucks at numbers.
But to claim twenty thousand barbarians were slain bordered on absurdity, it was so false it couldn't possibly be true.detailHaving children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wifeEastern · Summer fades into autumn. - Meh421dCommented
The constant whining values is jarring. The author really needs someone to proof and correct, these are so easy to spot.
Ten thousand Barbarian Tribe soldiers captured…detailHaving children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wifeEastern · Summer fades into autumn. - Meh421dCommented
The author needs to use beta readers.
"Let's not even talk about new recruits. Even the imperial army often gets scattered when facing the Barbarian Cavalry, isn't that right, General Mu?"detailHaving children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wifeEastern · Summer fades into autumn. - Meh421dCommented
The barbarians are invading from the north to the south. Not "from the south"
Over the following few days, rumors spread throughout North City that the Barbarian Tribe was about to invade from the south and that, in order to save himself, the North Prince had abandoned the people of North City and fled.detailHaving children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wifeEastern · Summer fades into autumn. - Meh422dCommented
I keep getting confused, was it a 122mm howitzer, or was it a mortar Cannon? if it was a mortar Cannon, what on Earth is a mortar cannon?
Such as the Brocade Guard, and the grenade cannon that he would soon demonstrate to the soldiers.detailHaving children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wifeEastern · Summer fades into autumn. - Meh422dCommented
A roundabout way to say, "I'd hit that."
No matter who Bai Qingqing was or what her identity was, as long as her rating was over ninety and she had come to the Prince's Mansion, she was a woman for Lu Chen.detailHaving children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wifeEastern · Summer fades into autumn. - Meh422dCommented
I completely agree with Seig. This book started off with a neat slow paced world of things people and relationships to explore. For a long time now it's been like sprinting down a steep hill, just trying to not crash and burn. Starting to wear me out.
"Of course, I do want to know what's going on, but I feel that it isn't something we should concern ourselves with and will resolve itself later. I thought staying here would be more peaceful than living in the 'Sleeping Fox' Runaway City, but it's even more suspenseful and filled with more tension than back home. I'm going to rest before the next test commences," Seig responded, grumbling as he walked into the building, closing the door behind him. - Meh422dCommented
The one that got snipped was an 8th, not 9th.
In fact, it wasn't just Wang Qingci who was shocked by the scene, even Li Feng and others who had previously seen Lu Chen use the Batrelei to snipe a Ninth Grade Martial Artist were equally stunned.detailHaving children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wifeEastern · Summer fades into autumn. - Meh422dReplied to True_Sheol
True enough. The Colt Peacemaker was a great equalizer. Politeness became more important to survivability as they became more widespread.
After all, before guns, all lives are equal.detailHaving children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wifeEastern · Summer fades into autumn. - Meh422dReplied to crownlessking
Yeah. you can keep it G rated and still say 'lay with', 'slept with', etc.
While on the road, Lu Chen had communicated with his wives and concubines, but due to the rush of the journey, there had hardly been any serious exchanges, and he scarcely practiced his Qi Refinement Mantra and Rejuvenating Skill.detailHaving children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wifeEastern · Summer fades into autumn. - Meh423dCommented
They have such a strange relationship. It's weird in a sweet way.
Jasmine finally rose, her face red, planting a strong kiss on his face before going to her room. - Meh423dCommented
The time frame being discussed seems to be, a month and a half, or half of a month. depending on what part of the previous chapter you're reading. it would be good if this would be constant.
"These benefits are genuinely good and more than adequate to offset the loss of a month and a half for a First Level Wizard." - Meh426dCommentedCh 169 Classic
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wth? This is a web novel. Don't write stuff like that for paid chapters or people will bail on you even if your writing is good. Kind of silly to put even in free chapters, especially if you ever want to publish the finished work for another revenue stream.
Anyway let's get back to the book, cause I can't explain what happened, that's a secret between Ethan, Hal, the girls, me, and my discord channel. - Meh428dReplied to jhon_k
The way this MC is written is like he's a sheltered 7 year old boy that hasn't started school yet because he's slow.
'Fuck, what is wrong with me' Ethan's mind was a mess and he had no control over his actions.