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Steeven_Velez

Steeven_Velez

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  • Steeven_Velez
    Steeven_Velez3 months ago
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    I see that it has the Yuri tag and not the harem tag, so at least I hope it stays that way. If it has romance, I hope you don't make the protagonist the passive one. Many stories are ruined like that, leaving the protagonist obeying her partner :'v As for the story, I really like this type of style:")

  • Steeven_Velez
    Steeven_Velez8 months ago
    Replied to Bamboo_Gossip7

    Ah, it will be polyamory, another novel that does the same thing, I don't like polyamory, I prefer a relationship between two, I love the harem but without that, the story had good foundations, I was really liking it but I'm leaving it here because polyamory isn't I like it, but otherwise very good, I'm loving your other novel as well, you have very good writing :")

  • Steeven_Velez
    Steeven_Velez8 months ago
    Posted

    The relationships of the characters will be complex, that is, they may be with other people in a sexual way, well apart from the protagonist, if you want the protagonist to stay with someone, you have to be prepared since they will be with other people in a way that they cannot. Like, it already happened to me and I left the novel because it took away all my desire to continue reading, it was in chapter 68, I wanted Xhez to be alone with Rin, damn, yes, I already know what Rin was going to do and Xhez could do The same if she wanted to but this is the beauty of this type of protagonist, that she can do it but the others can't, :'v

  • Steeven_Velez
    Steeven_Velez8 months ago
    Posted

    If you don't like polyamory in a story or harem, don't read this story, it totally ruined my experience of reading this novel, at least make it clear in the synopsis, it wasn't supposed to be the story of a Villain and her maid

  • Steeven_Velez
    Steeven_Velez8 months ago
    Posted

    If you don't like polyamory, don't read this story, it totally ruined the experience of reading this novel for me, they explain to you from the beginning of the work that the protagonist's mother created and gave birth to the protagonist because she wants her love and He looks for love without betrayal from her, that's why he didn't look for anyone else and only loves the protagonist, then why do you make the mother also have relations with her girlfriends, if from the beginning it was clear that he would only be with her, if not It's like she would have already had her own harem, and the girlfriends accept it anyway, if they make it clear that they are in love with the protagonist and the mother by going out a couple of times also makes her fall in love, what rubbish, at least it makes it clear that there will be all that In the synopsis, it screwed up my reading experience, I'm sorry for the words but this was very disappointing for me, I was loving the story so much :'v

  • Steeven_Velez
    Steeven_Velez8 months ago
    Posted

    If you don't like polyamory, don't read this story, it totally ruined the experience of reading this novel for me, I really liked everything else, unless they specify it from the beginning or in the synopsis, what a big disappointment I was, many stories They do that, also, if you don't like the Harem or a relationship of more than 2, don't read it since it is also present in the story. Personally, I like the harem, but without the polyamory.

  • Steeven_Velez
    Steeven_Velez8 months ago
    Posted

    I tried to read it since I found the synopsis interesting, but I couldn't go through more than 10 chapters since the reading and grammar are very simple, it was very disappointing for me, because I thought I was going to love it because these types of stories are my favorites but it wasn't like that, the story itself was not what I expected, I did what I could to continue reading but I couldn't stand it :'v

  • Steeven_Velez
    Steeven_Velez8 months ago
    Commented

    So far I have liked it, but the grammar of the novel is very simple at times and it takes me out of the story, I hope you can correct a little how the story is told :")

  • Steeven_Velez
    Steeven_Velez9 months ago
    Posted

    Everything was going well until the protagonist's mother joined them in bed, I thought that there were not going to be relationships between them other than with the protagonist, this is the problem with most stories with dual crops and things like that, It was better that the protagonist only stays with her mother, and Yasenia is not supposed to be her mother's love, that's why she created her and now with the first one she finds she wants to do it with her, chapters ago she said that she was tired of live and only when the protagonist was born did I recover everything, it makes no sense for Angel to want to do it with Yasenia's mother if they are very in love with her and her mother only joined them now, I mean Yasenia is all so that she loves her and her mother only By being there he made it that easy, this type of things are not to my liking, I was loving the story and this did hurt me, I won't even read chapter r18 with my mom :'v

  • Steeven_Velez
    Steeven_Veleza year ago
    Commented

    Seriously? Why do you have to give her a child now, she had to find a partner or whatever, not give them to her, I'll keep reading just because I like the story so far, but it's really annoying when they put this kind of stuff in. characters when the main character doesn't even have a human form, I thought they were going to kill him in the previous fight towards the FC he would have more determination to become stronger, what a mistake