bluecero

really. MC is right back to being worthless? this time your not just screwing him, but literally trying to screw him by some guy? tf

this really sucks. it was such an enjoyable read, but now it's challenging to continue. like going from reading to scrolling and reading once every few sentences, hoping it gets better in some way.

this is canon babysitting. you're draw was the overused "well hurr it's fate." so if fate happens either way, canon stays the same, and now you just have an average ability protag that really can't influence much beyond, "hey i got some valis, and I bullied some meaningless side characters." he basically has not much for social interactions, grinds in the dungeon repeatedly, an absent God and familia for the most part; and yet hasn't really gained anything for multiple chapters. the plot device and the entire premise has been built on is the scavenger system; yet the gains were first nerfed into the ground, and then later removed almost all together...if you don't include randomly mentioning a skill or two he gained days later as a passing thought. now he finally uses them, takes a loss, and you as an author somehow believe it's viable to give a huge middle finger instead of finally having some type of tangible gain for his efforts and skill. just wtf?

so the last few chapters is MC playing babysitter for canon with no gain? why not have him blow bell while you're at it.

wait.... we aren't nerfing and crippling him instantly after using his power once are we?

This is an enjoyable read that's well put together for the most part. The chapter lengths and quality are nice. The only draw back is that with the pacing of the story, combined with the update timing... we probably won't see much development for literally years.

I don't get it. you're world building a massive family\territory in the background; and instead of driving the plot or expanding on the built plot... you're just repeating the same boring empty harem collecting arc again and again.. I'd get it if it was an r18 novel, but it isn't. you're literally just creating empty filler at this point. he's gonna force himself on some girls, collect them, then leave with them, and then have them fade into being irrelevant and forgetting as 90% of this filler collecting spam isn't used or included into the already established world. ffs man

God damn. why add so many useless and pointless words. it literally makes it more difficult to understand than even the most terrible mtl novels.

these aren't sentences that can be understood without rereading then several times. why are you trying to pack so many ideas and descriptions into one out of order and overly long sentence?

tf?