J_D_Johnathan
Hello guys(and ladies). I am Author-kun, or Immortal-kun as I liked to call myself. I am just another random dude trying to make up the best stories he could come up with. IMMORTAL-KUN OUT
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again, you don't have to write "chapter 5" manually again Also, I will read this chap later
this will be good along with the heaven devouring codex, since he's inner energy is likely enormous from what i could tell reading the previous chapters
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you are becoming too detached to them my guy, feelings can change if you stay away for too long
advise to be ignored by the mc lol
i still don't understand how his father did not catch up his traininf all this time
MC: Heh, NOOB. I am the MC
i feel like the mc is too detached sometimes but also seems close to his parents sometimes
MC: I want to go inside the heavenly dao(and he will)
in a web novel, there is little need to point out simple details, but do try to keep the story well paced and explored, the current pace is kinda fast