capoci_anni

I've read 150 chapters so far. Overall nice work but I got bored. It feels like there are many interactions just for to write more or use more words to fulfill chapters word limit. Pace is so slow. Mc is like jp shounen type character. I understand he starts with age 14 and goes on but still a kid. I can take the blame, I just don't like childish mcs. In a medieval era, our mc has cultivation like eastern type, qi, dantian, meridians. It should be better in western type for western medieval fantasy in my terms. I was like 'am I reading a Chinese novel rn?' I just got distracted by the pace and bored. Also what r18 is tagged for? Just for beheading people? There aren't any sexual scenes or even attempts. I also don't like MC having no hormones or whatsoever.

Bah! This genre is not for 14 yo simp boys.

I tried to read for 20 chapter but it's not for me. All characters has a mindset of a teenager. It feels like I'm readin shounen novel, even his mother is childish. Not for my taste.

Bro what's her hair color? I dunno how you forget to mention…

Read grasping evil

As a reader of more than 70.000 pages on xianxia, xuanhuan genre and also I had read some novels on this site I can easily say that author has done well. Character is likeable, a human that you can put yourself in his shoes. Not childish, good design. Harem: It is very likeable. Each member has its own personality. Not many harem member which is quite good since their development and relationship will be much better. I like it. World building is also not overhelms readers. It is introduced as the story progress which is also nice. Author has good skill of describing about environment and characters that you can imagine their features in your mind well. R18 scenes is also well written and pace is likeable. Overall I very liked it. My only wish is keeping him writing. My only advice would be to don’t put pictures about characters. He should let readers imagine those characters. Not showing some AI maded crap images. I believe he can portrait those characters better by just describing with the words.

I think MC is too childish. I lost my interest in 250ish chapter. Author can't decide whether to write as ERO novel or normal novel. He couldn't blend those two aspect in together. As for s*x scenes, they are repetitive and dull, plain. Describing the scenes are not satisfying. I'm pro harem but female characters are so many and so dull.

It's poorly written. I had enough at 800ish chapter. This kind of novel need harem at first if you want to add romance in it. everything becomes repetitive after he become 6th rank. Generally lacks of dao, cultivation techniques and the most importantly is lacking of imagery. I mean he makes characters but what is it look like? After some time he is just writing to write. I don't understand why this serie has so high score. Just go read Er-Gen series or ATG if you want to read some good novels with nice descriptive features.

I've read 50k+ pages of xianxia and xuanhuan genre and I can say this serie is weakly written in terms of cultivation, combat and everything else. There are no enemy. Stupidly OP MC. No cultivation at all. No hardship. Only stupid NPC Males comes to our MC and somewhat get killed. Mc is simply a fkboy. I am glad that I stopped at ch 159...