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MC reeks to much chinese-bullshit-faceslapping-ching-chong that you can find in many trash chinese novel. no offense for the translator. just from the start in the sword smithing fight is so cringe with the typical chinese lines of faceslapping. also from the looks of it. he is gonna make it into force joining to his crew or something.
its kinda good i guess, its not bad but its readable. i have several problem with it 1. kinda bland - riser interaction and the the girls feels like NPC. cant really feel anything. also all those girls personality is so different to the original making it some boring 2. loopholes - there things forgotten from the anime that did bother 3. life choices - not sure what to call it. i mean using the idea of getting character from other anime is fine. but then to give it to sona, really think that would be an interesting move? (nope its not) also at first it was decided that xenovia will be given to ravel then suddenly, not mentioning anything, it becomes risers peerage maybe he forgot that ravel already completes her peerage. there no consistency to the flow of the story. 4. grammar(?)- not sure but around mid early chapters author decided to suddenly change writing style which other including my self didnt like. tho its good that he change it back. but the are instances that names are being mashed up with other.
where is the tomboy mirko??? i dont think thats her trait. such disappointment
was expecting for eiji to say the 3 secs joke 😕
#harem is a lie im already at the current chapters, around 180 and the heroine is not confirm even tho its confirm because he still hasnt confess, according to him. the only disappointed i guess is that the villian are already stealing heroine at protagonist collecting hero. MC has nothing. im not sure if thats the point of the novel but it has #harem #18 and I dont see that anywhere. even the mild #18 is from the pov of the villian. which as reader is not evem interesting
the only good part is the start where it was revealed to him what happen after he died. but that the following chapters aint worth it anymore. MC just become beta MC + with an annoying protag. that just go on and on. if he didnt enter the building where the protagonist was then there wont be any problem anymore but here he is messing with him.
Yeah its a villain story but like a novel made by a kid on what he thinks a villain is. Early chapter he just gotten OP already being able to trash the no. 2 hero. And its still lvl 1. Then didnt even narrate what happened after only told that his father was arrested then nothing. Like shoto and rei did exist anymore and goes with his monologues
thnx for the chapter i just started noticing it because i caught up but the chapter from previous one to this updated one has little information. because from the previous its can be shorten to timeskip-tease fl-done. for me its like a little to no importance. its like the prev chapter is only an hour long scene only