imagination1

I hope I don't sound like an asshole to you, it just my opinion that's all.

It's okay I guess not the greatest but also not the worst story, I just don't like the MC, he is constantly in his mind most of the time, his cold indifference came out of nowhere, I can tell he suffered in his past life or something, the content checking on the system is a little annoying, I mostly got to skip most of the words. But I guess the story is fine I guess.

Hell yeah!!!! He have revenge you mother!!

I hope this teach him about this is not a game anymore, instead this is real life

Good Writing Style, I like it a lot 👍

It's a decent RWBY story so far, the only problem I have is the updates, but I understand you had your own thing going on in life. And also there is no harem, I'm hope God not. Anyway this is a good story it only have five chapters and I'm always into it but I hope you don't drop if you do at least give a warning okay. Anyways I think I took much of your time I don't want to be a bother, you doing a good job and I hope you have a good day or good night bye.

Lol

exterminators, cool isn't it ?

Well damn I did not see that coming 😕 R.I.P Bumi

I hope you have a great birthday 🥳