hey it's the author here! I wanted to give an honest review on my novel and also list out some things before anyone starts reading: • First of all, the writing style since this is my first ever novel the starting chapters seem a bit lacking but I'm improving as the chapters go on! also I like to get to the point instead of getting more into details like describing how the air tasted that day or how the furniture looked I personally find it boring to write but if someone requests I might add those too. • The Characters, I wanted to explore some of them more but I still haven't got the chance to yet maybe in the future chapters? other than that I think Estoria has the most complex personality compared to any of my other characters so some of the readers might find her actions frustrating or might not understand her intentions at all I'll try to reveal them more often now tho ;) • The couples, now this is my favorite part there are the main too couples and two side couples so a total of four couples *Applause* let's start with the main couples, Estoria & Aluxio if some of the readers were having doubts if they'll end up together the answer is YES, they were only made for each other so I don't even know what else I would do with them and now this might be my favorite couple but I swear I treat them all the same and it's none other than *Drum Roll* TYRION & ESTON did you expect that? this couple is just way more intimate and fun for me they get along pretty well too unlike the someone else *Cough* Estoria *Cough* :D now for them I have some 18+ chapters too but not sure if I'll upload them if someone requests ig if I had to describe them with a word it would be helplessly in love (not a word but..) I can talk about them for an hour so let's move on to the side couples before I get side tracked, the side couple number one is definitely the most obvious one Darius & Isabella while the other couples can still act a bit more modest in front of others they have no reins on them at all they don't care if your eating they'll find that there is a table and lay on it eating each other without a care :) and for the other couple.. you'll get them way later in the story so it's a secret! • The plot, I'll have to admit there is a little bit of plot but it's not heavily plot based my focus is more on the characters and how they progress.. it's like Adventures with Estoria! :D no I'm just joking please read it while it's not untrue there is still more to it and I try to write the chapters to be not so boring but if no one gets my humor.. I'm so cooked. • Lastly, this novel was purely written to be not so serious and more entertaining I don't think this is a masterpiece but it's worth a try although it truly will depend on the person reading it some might find unbearable too I know it's not for everyone but please give it a shot! (I don't like needles tho) That's all for now might be a lengthy one but it's a review all right also feel free to ask any questions I'll do my best to answer them! oh one last thing I'm thinking of writing another novel after this which will be a bl and more plot based but it will be r-rated :3