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World-building is in progress because obviously we're only 5 chapters into the story but so far, it seems like a typical murim world. Sunyoung's story is pretty interesting with his motivations as clear as it can get. I enjoy how the fight scenes have been described. They're not overtly detailed but contain enough information to formulate the flow of them

Great chapter

Very interesting story so far. Heartbreak. Depression. Dealing with said heartbreak through friendship. It's similar to this one novel I read a while ago which was dropped a year ago but of higher writing quality. Excited to see him use his system to make his crush regret her decisions

I’m on chapter 35 of this novel, and I enjoy it. It reminds me of novels like “Gao Fushuai villain”, in that it’s the genre where a “villain” has to outwit the “protagonist”, including stealing the hearts of the wonderful female leads. This is an above-average, dare I say high-quality novel of this genre, because of the grammar, originality, voice, and humor.

after reading 81 chapters, I have a feeling that this novel will do great, as good as novels extra or authors pov or maybe even better. will have to see