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Jimbe shouldn't be in Impel Down at this stage of the story, you even altered the canon of the story just for the haki

Make him lose that way just so he can use Haki

What boring combats, each and every one of them too much light show, after this they are all gods that will need Dragon Ball Z level characters to face them

He doesn't have to face the whole pack of savages first, If Drogo doesn't accept he will be a coward and no one will follow him and Daenerys doesn't have the authority to command the wildlings with Drogo alive

Those of the negative comments towards this masterpiece of chapter did not understand is that our beloved protagonist did not lose against a simple savage looter and murderer but against the promised prince himself demons, who knows you Jon Snow, the King of the Night trembles just to know that he is going to face the warrior in person xd

How far does the story of this fiction go? I don't think Luffy will be born when this is finished, I say because the levels of power that are handled are exaggerated, if they are so strong so early, I don't want to imagine 40 years later

You ask for readers' opinions and delete those who in some way criticize you There were 19 opinions and now there are 17 and those 2 are negative, that only gives me to understand that the work is not yours and these ignorant people believe that you are writing it How cowardly you are if you delete this comment

It's a very disgusting fiction to change the gender of the characters just to satisfy the perversion of the babies who read this type of fiction 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

What a bad decision, everything the MC did is going to be only for his brother, after this I wouldn't be surprised if the protagonist changed to Doflamingo

A clear example of how to ruin a fanfiction in 2 chapters, amazing[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]