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ManiacReader11mthCommentedwhy did you make him a pothead?
Walking into the gym he went right to get changed, as he came out to stretch and warm-up the gummy hit him, he started laughing for no reason realizing that. No one even looked at him as he did so, it was just a fact that he was a pothead so they weren't surprised about it.- ManiacReader13mthCommented
yes
One more thing: You want Bell to be a girl in this story? It doesn't change anything for me, honestly, but I'd like to know what you think about it, since it might change their dynamic. - ManiacReader13mthCommentedChapter -1: The lion cub awakens!
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I liked the chapter a lot, thanks
8130 words! 8527 in English! That's the length of the chapter, what did you think? I feel like I'm a bit rusty, so I'm not sure if it turned out well; give me your opinions. - ManiacReader13mthCommented
it was really good, an awesome job of detailing what was happening durring the fight.
The fight was something that came up suddenly; I haven't written fights in a while, so I don't know how well it was. Was it clear or confusing? It was really challenging due to the disparity in the physical abilities of both characters; I had to delete a lot and rewrite even more. I hope it was enjoyable to read. - ManiacReader13mthPosted
this version is so much better than the older defiant fanfiction, the grammar is really well written so I don't turn dumb trying to read it, like with most fanfics on this site, interesting powers as well, author makes the wishes actually work and blend into the world. please don't drop this it is a really good fanfiction
- ManiacReader15mthPosted
a very good story, written so well that you can actually feel the tension between the characters. at the start the mc drifter might seem like he is overshadowed my the kirito, but that really changes around chapter 30. very interesting with the livestream of the boss fights around the world. please don't drop this.
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what about the titans in the wall, also the walls are made out out crystal from the titans. not just regular rock/brick.
"Air is a pretty good element to start with. If I had gotten earth, I could have patched the hole in the wall by bending the earth around me and fixing it," I contemplated the possibilities of different elements. - ManiacReader16mthCommented
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My Hero Academy - ManiacReader16mthReplied to Kakarot1809
or she could be from a lower level of nobility that doesn't have as much power as Kurt's household does.
"It's nothing but… if you told me earlier, then I would have dressed up a bit more for Kurt-sama." - ManiacReader16mthReplied to akira_kurokawa23
this is his second one time transforming, so he is a bit tired and so is not full size.
Suddenly, a loud rumble shook the ground, and within seconds, a massive figure emerged from thin air, towering over the small houses. Attack Titan stood 21 meters tall, his body radiating immense power. The Attack Titan formed near a house, making the whole structure crumble as if it were made of toothpicks. Debris flew everywhere. Eren let out a deafening roar as if to assert his dominance over the town and the Titans. - ManiacReader16mthCommented
I thought that they couldn't feel pain in their titan form?
You're Mine, Ymir thought, ready to end this battle; the ground beneath them erupted with several sharp spikes, piercing through their bodies and lifting them off the ground. Ymir's eyes widened in disbelief as she felt the cold metal spike pierce through her chest, causing her to stumble and gasp for air. The pain was excruciating, and she could barely move as her opponent, Levi, towered above her with his massive hammer raised high, ready to deliver the final blow to her Jaw Titan. - ManiacReader16mthReplied to ManiacReader1
Eren doesn't have enough experience with his titan form to have a good fight, he has been in zero fights and has only changed into his titan form about a dozen times. Where's Levi has been slaying titan for decades, even abnormal titans that don't act like regular titans, so it's safe to say that he would win.
"Captain Levi, you truly are humanity's strongest soldier." Eren praised, pulling himself out easily; Mikasa quickly got by his side. Despite the admiration, the Captain didn't like the title of 'humanity's strongest soldier' that was bestowed upon him; he never thought of himself as the strongest, especially when there were millions of people outside of their island and Kenny was still kicking. - ManiacReader16mthCommented
Eren doesn't have enough experience with his titan form to have a good fight, he has been in zero fights, and has only changed into his titan form about a dozen times. Where's Levi has been slaying titan for decades, even abnormal titan that don't act like regular titan. so it's safe to say that he would win.
"Captain Levi, you truly are humanity's strongest soldier." Eren praised, pulling himself out easily; Mikasa quickly got by his side. Despite the admiration, the Captain didn't like the title of 'humanity's strongest soldier' that was bestowed upon him; he never thought of himself as the strongest, especially when there were millions of people outside of their island and Kenny was still kicking.