DaoistGLDAR4

First, I love the Grimm series and it's great that there are fanfictions about it. Second, can you explain to me how the character can possibly be so stupid?! He's barely arrived, he has no future plans, he doesn't have any weapons (except for a traceable pistol that's way too loud). He has no combat training, he doesn't even take it seriously (since he completely ignores his system). And despite all that, he goes on a hunt... just reading it sounds completely idiotic. Couldn't he find a job and then spend the next seven months training so he doesn't look like a fool? And on top of that, the "Wesen" saw him and he didn't even die. Even Theresa, the Grimm girl, managed to slaughter many Wesen. So seriously, what's with this cowardice?!

This chapter is utter nonsense. The guard lets him into the dungeon without him belonging to a "Familia," and then he gets fined for going in! It's completely idiotic! The main character shouldn't have to pay for the guard's incompetence. Then the guard gives him a second fine because he crossed level 2, but that's his choice; if he wants to go in and die, he can do what he wants. And the last fine is for causing a disturbance in the dungeon, as if it's his fault he was attacked... it's ridiculous! And like an idiot, he just says yes, he doesn't even protest... Then, when he asks the Familia, he answers all timidly and hesitantly... do I need to remind you that he's 30 years old?!

The Sand-Sand Fruit isn't essential for defeating Enel either. And since it's vulnerable to any moisture, it would be better if Rowan gave it to Vivi. She would then be powerful enough to protect her country. And she would become a true desert princess in the process!

Given how damaged it will be, could Merry absorb Wapol's Devil Fruit and then devour the Thousand Sunny? This would give rise to a legendary ship!

Damn it!!! Can't he just teleport to Kaido's base and destroy everything?! Even if Kaido is there, their fight will annihilate everything... why does he keep letting himself be treated like this!!!!!!!!!!!!

That's great, I really like it. But why kill Devil Fruit users? I understand the Blood and Bone Fruit, but the Zoan users? He could have captured them and seen if he could extract their powers. For example, by killing them and redirecting the essence of the Devil Fruit into a normal fruit, using "Blue." He could then give them to his men or to Sengoku!

I thought it was good at first, but it's starting to lose steam. The main character repeats himself constantly, and he gives us a ton of completely useless information, including the author's "PS" which take up way too many words. If you're curious, you can just Google it. Then there's the "three girls" technique, which I personally find repulsive. Three cute young girls fusing together like a grotesque monster... And I seem to remember that he wanted to become a pure swordsman, but he hasn't even reached his limit and he's already looking for a Devil Fruit to artificially make himself stronger... it's quite disappointing. Compared to Shanks or Mihawk, he clearly lacks willpower!

The idea isn't bad. But why remove an arm? That's really bad. How will he use techniques that require two hands? It'll make him even weaker...

Stop praising Roger!!!! I don't really know why, but I hate him. He's just a clown who wouldn't hesitate to steal the freedom and lives of millions of people. And despite all that, he still dares to laugh... He deserves nothing more than to see his companions and friends die right in front of him. I really hope Yoriichi doesn't become his friend in any way. And you described Roger as being too powerful. You have to understand that he's at the end of his life, weakened by an illness. Even Whitebeard lost a huge part of his power at Marineford. So with every effort he makes, he should die a little more.

I think Sengoku is a pathetic, cowardly, and hypocritical individual! He worries about a possible future threat without even being sure it's significant. But on the other hand, he completely ignores the existing pirates of the New World, who are a thousand times more dangerous and cruel than Luffy's crew! Sengoku even sends an Admiral to deal with young pirates who haven't even been active for a year. And then he acts all high and mighty, as if he's acting with wisdom and intelligence, when in reality he's just a cowardly fool... I still find it completely absurd that Garp does nothing to save his grandson, his own flesh and blood. It's crazy that he prioritizes his corrupt organization over his family.