Feels good, beyond doubt

I agree with this, the start is a bit out of place but it's now coming together slowly by slowly

You could have extended her stay in the story for a bit😁😁

Good work Frost_16, am really liking your work. Keep it up😊😊

Am already hiccuping over here 😁😁

I like the concept of rebirth, a new chance for the MC to emerge again[img=recommend][img=recommend]

The moment I started to read, I was too absorbed only to realize I've already finished the two chapters already. It's a good art piece bringing out a few contemporary issues faced today.

Great work. Put in more effort on character building.

Nice try try to develop more storyline .