boop_snoot

Love it, if metaphorically sucking the authors dick meant more stable uploads id be sucking it all night long. For real tho its a fun read with good progression, it doesnt feel like he gets op too quick nor stays weak for too long. Seems like a hard thing to balance with fics like this but he did good.

Rip

Okay theres alotta things here that confuse me timeline wise, pretty sure early on they mentioned whitebeard remnants, meaning whitebeard was dead. But that hadnt happened yet, theres alotta stuff here that makes ya think the author keeps forgetting what has and what hasnt happened yet.

Ah yes, already going down the path of THE TRUE DRAKE HUNTER, AND I, IGON

Lookin good so far, keep it comin. *ahem* words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words

Okay look you needa check like almost every single time El says something cus those sentences got butchered hard. Just entire words missing. Also, description made me think thered be no 18+ stuff early on and then the entire tentacle cumjuice stuff happens so yeah