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ive read more than 500nchapers of your story and i loved it but the constand downputting of rowan about the familytraits inherited or her skill with magic especially when rowan hersef does it despite her adventiges such as death surge, teleportation ,her meta knowlegde etc. also her fall from a smart and plotting mc htat created her little group and dealt preemtative strickes such as revieling tom marvolo riddle as a halfblood to lessen the support he gets into oh no severus is so much better at litterally everithing than her be it dueling or variouse forms of magic and just stumbeing about insted of taking care of her problems like her soul studies that coud help to deal with voldy hydra and possibly even the negative sideefeccts of death surge it just hurts seeng such good story and character being ripped down
i dont understand why you gave her 3 founders and merlins heck even morganas bloodline if she doesnt get any skills out of it that will give her the advanteges needed to deal with hydra like the gift of foresight from merlin another thing ive read these 517 chapters practically without breack and rowen went from smart panning mc that deals with her problems and creates plans for the future to some stupid stale sidecharackter that just exists to fill the blanks i mean shes targeted by both voldeshmort and hydra both very dangerous wizards that she knows are after her so why doesnt she work out her weaknesses such as transfiguration or her project on souls so that she can destroy hydra and voldy possibly even cleanse herself of that weird magic poisening she got going on it just feels as if you had a lot of good ideas that are just thrown away
i still dont understand whats supposed to be so bad about that ya know those simulators you put on youre stomach that make you feel period pains some female friends went vicious at us guys becouse we didnt belive it was as bad as the girls said so the girls tryed those symulators out to see if they wörked after authenticidy check us guys had to have them on for 3 whole days and nights i and tom pulled the short straws so we got full power afterwards the girls had expressions as if they had seen ghosts when we told them that after the initial 10 15 minutes of getting used to it it didnt bother us before they started to sceam about the simulators obviously not being compareble to actual priod cramps and pains despite they themself having checked that the simulators coused more than theyre own usual levels of cramps and pain just another thing about girls i will never understand
i had a fight with an old acqaintance who overstepped some lines that anyone with commensense knows not to cross well it wasnt much of a fight considering that after his attemts of macho stong guy behavior jet not really getting nany actual hits in i just punched that motherducker in the stomach once dude wasnt at school for the next two weeks thankfully managed to talk my way out of trouble due to that guys past actions
i mean time is a outside force so tecnically ageless also would be kinda cool to just have him watch the universe die and then drift of to another universe as his body reforms mayby can get different wörlds powers becouse of dying in them and body reforms as a part of that universe instead of an outsider that has no access to that wörlds powersystem