pepero0

These exclamation marks are getting too muchh 🫠

Wait nvm wrong novel

The actual story is interesting but there are wayyy to many plot holes and several of the numbers don’t add up. Not to mention, as soon as I got to the paid chapters the quality diminished and there were several unfinished words or missing numbers (ex: 0 min instead of 10), it really interrupted the flow and I couldn’t continue reading

Seriously? Did he alr forget all the ‘geniuses/friends’ he met earlier that were from powerful families?

Please fix it

JUST 700 meters? That’s a pretty big distance lol

Started reading because it was trending, not worth it at alll. For one, the writing is like reallyyy bad. It feels like whenever anything happens, the writer just tells not shows. Also, there’s like no info on the actual world unless some character vomits everything out randomly. The actual plot seems interesting but the author is taking such a cliche direction it’s annoying. 2 stars DO NOT RECOMMEND

It might be a choice but it disrupts the engagement of the reader and makes it harder to read

In terms of plot, this is pretty interesting but the writing needs a lottt of improvement. Like, during dialogue there would be missing details or responses wouldn’t match what was said before. For example, sometimes someone would answer a question that wasn’t asked or bring up something random without even finishing the previous convo

Basically 20 chapters for a single day to go by in that world after the first 100 chapters and mc doesn’t have his first time until early 100s not to mention the repetitive use of words with incorrect connotations like “affirmative” even the overall writing is so cringy with horrible references I got second hand embarrassment so many times when reading. what makes this book worse is that there are so many chapters for the mc’s other personas I almost skipped 100 chapters for that alone. Don’t recommend so save your time