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Well, I understand that feeling. Honestly, I'm inexperienced in developing characters in terms of story and just roughly mimic with my understanding. If that's lacking, well I'm chased by time and also with the mind so that readers don't get bored with the slow flow and without lingering directly to the core of the story . 😁😁😁
Hmm, I understand what you mean about the storyline so far. What I can answer is that the chapter so far is only a prologue and the story about Mc is only a foundation for me to create more creative stories in future stories that are not always based on canon. After this the story will be continued by his children who follow the flow of the original story that has been messed up due to Mc's actions.
Only one thing I can tell you, it's a mess.
Actually the term ROB, it is only in the perspective of Mc only. The entity, like the admin, still has a superior.
Yes, he copied the way the character explored the world
You didn't read it wrong, it really did happen.
It's just a gimmick, so that the MC seems like a knight
She just dodged it, man
Agree, because if the story is as you imagine then this fanfic will be complete fanservice. Because as a writer, I can barely imagine how to replace Rezivim's figure when that variable is gone, hate that I say this but without him the dxd story would never exist.
No, I don't want too many women around the MC but his future life after the civil war arc ends will be a bit sad, if I describe his future.
The place he went to was Mc's territory, so as a precaution something had been installed there, such as a buff removal or weakening resistance to certain elements. You know, the main character is quite careful.
Remember the timeline, besides that at that time I thought it was good to make him look like a young master before returning to his original nature in canon.
I thought it was cute, changing Ddraig's genre but I personally think the original genre of red dragons was female
His strength will gradually be shown.