FantasyRar

They are not canon, I am just adding more depth to Hueco Mundo in my story.

This would connect with original timeline. But, I don’t know when honestly.

That is a truck load of hearts. Thanks a tonne

True, this obstacle he faces is necessary because in reality, Hueco Mundo isn't far off as an Anarchy. The strong rules over authority and rights. By learning to overcome the obstacle, he would essentially remove a weakness. However, removing sympathy and empathy from an individual with nothing to lose is an invitation to unending conflict. Harribel is a required character to portray the good in life. While Figgs is required to show someone who is new to Hueco Mundo's lifestyle the dark side of it.

True, with great strength, you can understand the what other major powers are within your circle. Just like how a big fish finally moved to a bigger pond.

I like this part. How I perceive shadows, they are known for being shade, shade is usually a place where the sun doesn’t directly hit, which causes the area to be colder than if there wasn’t shade. Great description

She does seem to be the nosy one when it comes to power.

I can visualise her shifting her tone to the not so delicate one. 😂

Interactions between character brings in depth to the story. You could definitely work on that. Perhaps even better, bringing life to a new OC.

I have two perspectives to this. Drawing attention can propose an arduous path of unfortunate situations. But, with greater difficulty, there is a corresponding reward to it. Not drawing attention proposes an easier path for him in which battles are minimal(this is usually the case). But, I shall see how you continue to develop this story.