HinkoLa

bro stop doing this shit

ctrl+c ctrl+v chapter

bro u just repeated 7 chapter why u doing this sheet?

ITS ALIVE FINALLY UPDATE[img=gift][img=gift]

Bro, stop releasing previous chapters

BRO STOP RELOAD CHAPTERS

My review might look strange to you but I'm not a native English speaker and I don't know English well enough to read fanfiction without a translator so I didn't mention Tai's grammar if you compare it to other one piece fanfics it's really okay but I did notice a very drastic change in character after the 2nd comma and also that in the last chapters before the arch with big mom I didn't notice any growth in strength the only sentences about his training we heard from sengoku and it was superficial but still readable

but I'll let you guess for yourself because the author tried very hard to make this situation very dramatic (Continuation of the comment above)

In general, I think I understood the author's cunning idea, it was such a preparation for a time skip if you look at the whole situation, you can understand what the smoothie is up to (I didn't have enough characters to write everything I wanted)

This fanfic is cool, very cool, but when Ace showed up I was a little confused why he doesn't know any haki, as far as I remember when Ace got to the whitebeard's team he already awakened haki in the battle with the vice admiral, and also the beginning seems a little drawn out. But overall it's a normal fanfic to read P.S :author is it just me or do I love your fanfic more than you do where are your power stones?