juliana_harris
My only reason here is Under the Oak tree … but hopefully I can find something else to read because smh …
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the story starts off nicely done, i can still picture everything, every step every street faces, etc from the first chapter. And the love story is rather sweet, i really liked a character like Claude and a Character like Camellia. there were moments where i could feel their joy or their sorrow and i believe only a good storyteller can move people with their stories. But, the story itself and the way the characters behaved at times came out a bit short at times, some necessary details were left out and it was a bit to the imagination to do the job. Many things I feel were left unexplained, especially the past referring to Laura and Gilliard (it was his name right?) like the first scene where Laura is "working" or when it was mentioned that Gilliard had known Laura for many years as in childhood (?) ... Then, it feels also a bit weird that a whole weight in the story is the possible homosexuality between Claude and Lius, but then the young king easily changed the laws. like, how does that even work? and at the end the excessive adulation towards Camellia and the kids was perhaps too much. don't get me wrong i enjoyed Claude's jealousy every second but it felt like pushing it and cheesy all together ... Anyways, there were holes on one side and extra bits on the other side... Execution wise it needed just that bit more to be just excellent.
thank you for the story, i had a good time reading it
finding Rosé lol
more like :
I love Ian but everyone is like :
this butler is definitely searching to die before his time lol
a bit worried, by the looks of it, it's 4 years with only his mother so ... idk idk
my Lord... my lady
ok, I'll keep that in mind if it happens again. thank you 😊
this "part 2" title is very confusing if there isn't a part 1 before ? i don't remember seeing it at least...
Gaior or Gaoir ?
this is good
they do now 😂
same question ❓
yeah the more i read this the less i believe Camellia's mother did it. so i will read this to make sure whoever was responsible pays for it. I bet the reason Camellia was so precious to her mother has to do with the fact she loved the marquis dearly, i don't think she would have done something to hurt him ...
I also think she was framed, and was she really acting all mighty after getting pregnant ? idk idk