Not much fan of scary stories but your story got me really intrigued. Keep uploading more chapter to attract other readers. Your book really has so much potential shown in the first 3 chapter.

Keep up the good work and upload more chapter.

You can try to limit your word count per chapter at 1500. That will help you have more chapter to upload

The story is interesting and intriguing but it needs a more attractive start that will hook the readers to the story.... The writing quality is so far great... The story development along with main character development is a bit in the slow side but it's not a bad thing. Rather it will probably gives more depth to the story and character... Overall, this book has so much potential.

The writing quality is a bit lacking... What I mean is interms of how the paragraphs are arrange which is kinda different from usual... However, how the story was written is easy to follow and understand... The story development show so much potential and the characters have intriguing personality that catches my interest... I hope this book will find more readers.

So far, the story really catch my interest... Keep up the good work.

I think there's too much in your paragraph spacing... It's kinda hard to read using phone.

A solid world background with a very interesting and we'll written story. It's very easy to understand and follow up with what was being told in every chapter, even though I'm not that familiar with some terms and places. Overall, I hope this book get more attention from the readers. Keep working on it, Author.

Still waiting for volume 2. Will it be written in this book or in the first book? Anyway, I hope you keep working and improve the book.

It's a nice book to read. It doesn't have the usual element of the standard novel or book like describing the feeling of the characters or the environment but that gives more focused to the interaction between the many characters of this books. Overall this book gives you a nice vibes while reading the story.