the main character of this novel even has difficulty maintaining his sanity. how could he possibly have a harem. he hate himself dude 🗿

i see many hate comment in this chapter 🤣🤣🤣

same as this one

i have discord , but rarely use

i don't know, give it try! if you want ask something, ask me here. or maybe want to criticize me or something else, go ahead tell me here.

it was clearly just his thoughts dude

You can be sure if you have read the first chapter. and that chapter was the chapter that made me feel tormented when writing. my Heart...

I can't make the main character have a harem. From the start I created this novel to focus on character development. maybe I'll add some relationships between characters for the second volume.

thanks dude

no is not 🤣

after I finished my final exam :) fk this school :) My parents said I had to be serious about my final exams first :) oh my god, help me :)

Sorry, I'm busy with my final exam. I didn't have time to answer you quickly :(. and whether there is a harem or not. You can guess from looking at the synopsis that this novel does not have a story that leads to a harem

thanks for the review. Yeah, I am aware of the two things you mentioned, in the first 30+ chapters. i will make this better for charakter design. but for the background, i will make it slow.

eh, what do you mean?

I think not everything is as you think. There are many other novels that have fun and happy stories. I am sure about this...

no problem, I can understand English it's not your first language.

I don't understand what you call "molly" but if you refer to the main character, I can only say that he is a genius. but I'll just state that in the first few chapters I didn't intend to show it. because it's part of the plot...

no, this novel is contracted before the start of WSA 2024. I was a little sad when I realized that. I wish I knew about it earlier :)

i'm not sure i can help you but, i will try... Moreover, you are right that this is my first novel. In fact, I've only been learning to write since November last year. I believe that narrative is the most important thing in writing. I'm not saying dialogue and monologue are not important. but my priority is narrative. I don't know what the method name is. but I always exaggerate the narrative I write. makes it look unique and not monotonous. I also always try to express my imagination and make the situations I write about described in a situation that is easier to understand. but using a very difficult narrative is also very bad. because some readers will definitely be confused and their imagination will be destroyed before understanding the written narrative. Therefore, don't make the narrative too difficult to understand. but also don't make the narrative too easy and monotonous. hope this Will help you... i think... example : David runs alone in the morning. The sunlight is still dim, indicating that he is running at a time when the sun is not yet fully visible. He continues running alone like a lonely person trying out a new routine in his life. The festering loneliness in his heart compels him to do something, even though David doesn't know the meaning behind his current actions. He keeps running without direction or purpose. Running and running aimlessly, he tries to forget the loneliness that is rotting in his heart by doing something he doesn't usually do. The sound of irregular breathing coming out of his mouth indicates that he is not accustomed to this activity. But David chooses to keep running, even if it is meaningless, until he can't run anymore. (and for dialogue and monologue. For me, it's enough to use my own imagination. However, make sure the dialogue and monologue flow naturally. make it as natural as possible. don't let yourself think that it looks stiff and the most important thing of all is the storyline which continues to develop.) Don't completely believe all that. after all... i'm just newbie

I've planned it from the start. However, there are several conditions that must be met first to get it. it's part of the plot... so...