William_Wilson_6078

was rather enjoying it till the updates stopped. plz finish the story author

this was a disappointing choice 😕

don't thank me. I'm just a mouthy asshole

PLEASE move the story along. these chapter long descriptive monologs are a waste and the repetitions of useless info is just turning this story into a fucking slog.

worse start that the 1st attempt

use the momentum you got and start pumping up parkers' stats and abilities. hes still pishing rookoe numbers almost 200 chapters in. 🤣

do you have this on a patreon?

so far i have mostly enjoyed this story but you do have a few things that could use some work. your pacing is a bit jumpy. the mc isnt being utilized according his stated personality and abilities and drive. he wants power to not be a stepping stone but fails to use what he has at had to grab that power. also if he has gone up 2 power levels why isnt that reflected better in his stats. he's had like 4 different positive body alterations and hes still barley 20 points in each gotta up them numbers or the rest of the system stuff is made fairly pointless. and your chapters are kinda short. You have a good plot and characters. i look foward to how the story goes

you have an interesting story but you seem to be jumping around alot

perfect template to have him massacre hydra with and wrap up their involvement