William_Wilson_6078

better keep this catholic Spider-Man away from children

cringy MC and poor writing ruined any potential this story had. this story is 90% whinge and repetition 10% actual story

for a guy with perfect recall, he sure asks the same people the same damn question repeatedly.

the repetitive dialog and a continuous continuity rewrites are getting really hard to ignore

the fuxk even was this chapter?

holyshit hes gone super cringe in these last couple chapters

the cringe in this story just gets worse and worse

binged the story, and the mc started out as likable, then went and turned into psycho douche extraordinaire, and its kinda down just downgraded the story

last chapter you had kenpachi without the eyepatch saying it was before he got it and then bam now, he's removing the eyepatch. keep the story consistent, please

needs a lot of work, but for what it is, it was readable