what is a moment of joy, compared to a lifetime of happiness
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honestly we need more story's like that I think 🤔
I finely get to use this
It's really good so far, and the story and Grammer are on point
needs work, and stuff needs to be explained better, the grammar is okay but needs work as well, so overall needs an editor and beta reader I think 🤔 in my opinion, I however do like the stroy concept but like I said needs work
what you just said there