Mx_Third
Ambivert College Artist. I like to write on my breaks. (I'll be back on weekends~)Hiatus (November to December)
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Hi, thank you for the suggestion. This has been changed as of today! Thank you for reading.
Hi Author! First of all, I like the idea, the setting, and how you narrate the story. The writing is good, making pictures inside my head was easy because of it and I enjoyed reading this, but as I read through the chapter, I noticed some punctuation errors. It doesn't really bother the experience for me, but it would be better to correct them as there are some readers who are sensitive to that detail. I hope my review could help you, great work on this book!
A message to everyone who wants to read and is currently reading this book! Hello this is the author of this book. First of all, I'd like to thank those who gave this book a chance as this is my first time writing a book, I'm aware that this probably has a lot of flaws, but please feel free to share your opinions about this book, I'd like to use your feedbacks to improve my writing! I also would like to apologize if some words are difficult to understand in some parts of the book as English isn't my first language, but please don't worry because I'm constantly studying the English language. If you have any questions about some parts of the story, feel free to ask me, I'll try to respond as soon as possible!
Just a little note to everyone! The ancient golden core is something I made up for the story, most xianxia novels only call it golden core!
How many times did I used the word technique? Did anyone keep count?[img=thinking][img=Why]Have a good day, everyone!