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OtterBear1

OtterBear1

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Ambivert College Artist. I like to write on my breaks. (I'll be back on weekends~)Hiatus (November to December)

2023-07-27 JoinedGlobal
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  • OtterBear1
    OtterBear12 years ago
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    Nice read. I'm done reading the free chapters, hoping that I can unlock the chapters soon. Try this one if you love fantasy with an interesting female main character.

  • OtterBear1
    OtterBear13 years ago
    Replied to Dino_19

    👀

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  • OtterBear1
    OtterBear13 years ago
    Replied to Cinna_Bunny

    Thank you for the comment! The typos will be fix as soon as I get some free time from school, thank you for understanding!

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  • OtterBear1
    OtterBear13 years ago
    Replied to Dino_19

    Thank you so much! [img=Loving it]

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  • OtterBear1
    OtterBear13 years ago
    Replied to Champion_collector

    Hi, thank you for the suggestion. This has been changed as of today! Thank you for reading.

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  • OtterBear1
    OtterBear13 years ago
    Posted

    This book had genuinely caught my interest! It was really interesting for me how the author wrote the different reactions according to groups and a backstory of how power came to be in the world of the story, it makes the story feel unique. Great job!

  • OtterBear1
    OtterBear13 years ago
    Replied to OtterBear1

    Ohh I see, but you're doing well! Keep it up! [img=recommend]

  • OtterBear1
    OtterBear13 years ago
    Posted

    Hi Author! First of all, I like the idea, the setting, and how you narrate the story. The writing is good, making pictures inside my head was easy because of it and I enjoyed reading this, but as I read through the chapter, I noticed some punctuation errors. It doesn't really bother the experience for me, but it would be better to correct them as there are some readers who are sensitive to that detail. I hope my review could help you, great work on this book!

  • OtterBear1
    OtterBear13 years ago
    Replied to Cinna_Bunny

    Thank you for the feedback! I hope you're enjoying this book!

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  • OtterBear1
    OtterBear13 years ago
    Replied to Cinna_Bunny

    Hahahah Yes

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