Shichibukai14

Muyan is so Funny😂

Wow! I'm so happy for them😊 I was supposed to be sad, but when Muyan accepted him back again, I was just smiling all throughout.

I feel so bad for Yutu🥺

I like the writing quality, but there's something missing on the story development, but it's okay! There's still room for improvement. The character design is okay, but it's too common for me because I've seen or read a lot of movies or books that has similarities to your novel. The updating stability is pretty good for me, but sometimes you miss a day. And lastly the world background is still common for me, but I do like your style and still there's something missing to it, and I'm sure you can still improve. Overall, so far so good, but needs improvement. Keep up the good work. You have received a new reader.

I love it! I've read up to 8 chapters non-stop and so far I really loved it. I'm sleepy now, so I'll continue reading tomorrow. Keep up the good work.