George_Nader_3914

also, comment on how many words you would prefer in a chapter because it will cost fast passes after chapter 50

thanks, but after the latest chapter, it's going to take a bit of time to plan the next steps and think of how to make this novel a bit more interesting so I suggest you wait for a couple of days and then reread it from the beginning. Hope you enjoy the novel.

Author here, this is my first novel so there might be some mistakes or plot holes, if you do find any, please comment on it and explain what the error is and I will later update it.

what does that look like?

comment number 101

best novel of all time but cia should be killed, she is literally the worst character of the whole series except the has a usefull ability like damn bro she could have just been a normal vampire and she would be the first to sacrifice for their wellbeing

best story ever and long so i can enjoy it for a while and also somehow managed to finish 50+ chapters at the same day, kinda weird but the story was worth it and i will 100% continue it till the end.

first of all, the writer doesn't know how to do math or something cause every single number is incorrect, either the writer is lazy or didn't even finish grade 3 since it's fricking easy math. second of all, the writer didn't even mention the character descriptions except the fact she has these big sacs on her chest and curvy body and her hair, not even describing how the face looks. also a lot of grammatical mistakes which could be ignored but still and I Think the writer just doesn't want to complete the words, like for example the word t-shirt got spelled "tee" like dude, what? third of all there is no word background description, or at least not enough, the writer is even so bored he doesn't even want to describe the entrance to the castle, like where are the rooms, what is in there exactly, he just mentions there is a room with a bed and closet at least from chapter 15 and before.

that's not even close dude, it should be around atleast 10 essence shards and a bunch more magic crystals and way more food portions

the translator needs to get a discount on his work