Bradley_Jacques

I mean maybe, but I feel like my writing has changed so much that I would have to rewrite parts

nah

fixer? Project Moon Mentioned

good premise, and characters feel in character. but I feel that the grammar holds this story back. I recommend going back through pervious chapters and fixing grammar using an outside source if English is not your first language like grammaly or quillbot.

can you give the mtl link to the novel?

will take this into account, thanks.

I edited the skill to something else due to advice from a writing senior about just how complex conversion is, and to go with something simple

yeah I just push things out slowly to not burn myself out like previous works that I had

wow that was a fast comment, any feedback? looking to improve and maybe rewrite a few parts I'm unsatisfied with

cloud knights, and they are speaking Chinese, this isn't permanent though