Bradley_Jacques

ngl this life is going on for wayyy too long, it's already 40 chapters while the others were 15-20, the pacing is off and just feels like og author Is dragging out the story

What chapter does this correspond to in the raw?

I mean, its not bad. but it's more of a story that you just turn your brain off and read rather than actually pay attention. for example, look at the fact that the mc is an emenator of abundance, yet their powers seem strangely unintuitive. yes, she's strong, but when compared to other emanators like cornerstone aventurine and archeron, her powers seem kinda boring and extremely uncreative. an emanator of the abundance just making flowers and vines? and it's not even done at a large scale, just plant life. anyways the story is mid but it's decent from something from webnovel

harem is a detriment when written anything other than perfectly, and even then it still holds back stories. this is webnovel, 90% of stories can barely keep a cohesive plot line, letalone develop 2+ female characters that remain present in the plot

I mean maybe, but I feel like my writing has changed so much that I would have to rewrite parts

nah

fixer? Project Moon Mentioned

good premise, and characters feel in character. but I feel that the grammar holds this story back. I recommend going back through pervious chapters and fixing grammar using an outside source if English is not your first language like grammaly or quillbot.

can you give the mtl link to the novel?

will take this into account, thanks.