Author_for_fun
I write FF for fun, but try not to take my work too seriously.Though, I will appreciate any feedback.
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Author_for_fun2mthPostedWhile this story had too much info dumping, it was still interesting. Yet the plot twist after his fight with a certain chicken completely ruined the story for me. It felt forced and rushed, and the follow-up was even more rushed. He suddenly has all his peer members, prominent side characters, and becomes an ice berg. You were doing so well author up until that point.
- Author_for_fun2mthReplied to Crow_n_me
Especially Issei. Jeez can't stand Anime Issei. Novel Issei ain't so bad.
Damian didn't like Riser and he was a big fan of Rias. The way she tried her best at everything, her slightly naive side, her protective nature, and so much more. Damian wouldn't go as far as to say he was in love but he certainly cared for her greatly. Especially when compared to Riser. - Author_for_fun2mthReplied to Mr_Green_420
In the end all these Fanfics are wishfufilment. The ones with underpowered characters are secretly masochists I'm convinced.
In terms of power, Damian was barely keeping up with his peers but that wasn't his true strength anyway. Damian had wisdom well beyond his years. He understood that they would all be watching while using some sort of magic. - Author_for_fun2mthReplied to
Rather, it has an overpowered character then an underpowered one.
In terms of power, Damian was barely keeping up with his peers but that wasn't his true strength anyway. Damian had wisdom well beyond his years. He understood that they would all be watching while using some sort of magic. - Author_for_fun2mthReplied to VoidBro
Yeah that's weird af can't lie.
But the system showed that he was currently 20 years old. The only possible reason is that Dandite had helped him regain his youth. - Author_for_fun2mthCommented
why is he even surprised by what she did. He watched the anime. That's why a majority of MC's in these Fanfics want to avoid Freya for this exact reason. Why lower your MC's IQ so much for unnecessary drama?
And Freya could see that now, Ethan harbored dislike and rejection towards her, a stark contrast to his previous attitude. - Author_for_fun2mthReplied to Nameless_Crown
You can't apply this worlds logic to danmachi. in a world where it's kill or be killed, doing what Freya did is not a big deal. Also that was some dungeon shenanigans, not just Freya.
Ever since the 'speculation' about Freya arose in his heart a few days ago, Ethan has developed a subconscious rejection towards his goddess. - Author_for_fun4mthReplied to MellowFellow
Which if I'm not mistaken is a big no, no. Or maybe I'm being influenced by the fics I've read in the past.
Although Aston is only at level 1 now, his situation cannot be viewed with common sense. After all, he was labelled as an ancient hero by Loki. Perhaps a month's time is enough for Aston to grow rapidly and meet the minimum standards for going to the deeper floors. - Author_for_fun4mthReplied to Author_for_fun
Now it looks like he's going to horde it even. If he's not going to use it on himself, why not just give it to her.
"After all, Hephaestus hasn't done anything to deserve such a valuable gift from me." Calming down, Aston silently contemplated. - Author_for_fun4mthReplied to DaoistZack
They don't, and the God's are already immortal so he's not giving away immortality. Besides, he'll have plenty of chances to get potions better than this one. Giving it away and asking for some benefits from Hephaestus doesn't seem like a bad exchange.
"After all, Hephaestus hasn't done anything to deserve such a valuable gift from me." Calming down, Aston silently contemplated. - Author_for_fun4mthCommented
He's taken plenty of L's we don't need more to realize how pathetic he is.
[Author's note: This may sound foolish, but Lucius is arrogant enough to try to provoke Shakti, and also wanted to show that he is not so OP at this moment, that he can die to a level 5 at any moment.] - Author_for_fun4mthReplied to Lonely_Hermit98
Not nitpicking. Author wants Drama so he's forcing it in, or he's ignorant.
[Author's note: This part of the city I mentioned is a location I'm creating here, it's not canonical. Another thing, I had Aiz attack Riekling; I believe it makes more sense if she encountered some monster in the city. Knowing Aiz and her unconditional resentment for monsters, I know she hates dragons above all, but I don't think she wouldn't attack a goblin if she saw it in the streets of Orario. I believe it makes much more sense for this attack to happen if she saw Riekling. And of course, Lucius would attack Aiz; first and foremost, my character is a chaos creator. I never liked fanfics where the MC is friends with everyone; there have to be tensions and disputes, which is not difficult with his personality.] - Author_for_fun4mthReplied to Devourer_of_Words
This made me laugh.
I ignored my current family. Hestia had her mouth open, and her ghostly image was escaping from her open mouth; Bell had lifeless eyes. I was so indignant that I didn't look at them and quickly ate my breakfast, leaving the church and heading to the guild while my family didn't move an inch. - Author_for_fun4mthReplied to Seiyu
Because he's entirely made up by the author. The author feels like a 15 year old child who thinks this behavior is cool after reading a few Chinese novels and decided to give his mc that personality but it doesn't work in Danmachi.
"Could you stop offending my family? I would like some respect..." She said, and her voice resonated with a certain anger. I know I'm stepping into this goddess's blacklist now, and maybe I can die here if I cross more of this line, but I wasn't going to let this dirty dwarf say whatever he wanted just because his goddess was here. - Author_for_fun4mthReplied to Kirozen
Haven't you ever gone to a club. Shouting for an hour is nothing.
After that, I had to stop to rest a bit, and I sat down in the middle of the floor, trying to recover my burning and hoarse throat before going back to the surface floors. I realized I had reached my limit. - Author_for_fun4mthReplied to Royal_Tigris
For Drama, obviously.
However, he also found out that, due to his wish for infinite energy, the system had blocked his growth potential until he reached the age at which he died on Earth. When he realized this, his previous life awakened and his memories merged, something that happened a week ago. - Author_for_fun4mthReplied to Lyus
I'm not the only one who thought he was kak weak.
"You are right, Ryan. You need to make sure you hide this ability from others. This kind of ability will bring you bad things. Even when you thought that you already reached the level of God, you still cannot reveal this ability."